foto zerüi 0 Posted August 19, 2007 This is by far the best picture in your portfolio so far. The lighting on the young girl is great. The beam of sunlight is well captured. The reflection provides the foreground interest. The pose is good, but might have been improved if the girl's face were seen in profile, with rim lighting like that on her legs. If there is a weakness it is in the landscape element. The waterfall makes a great subject, but it is not quite sparkly enough to be the subject of the girl's gaze. And the water is burnt out in places. I have been experimenting with HDR is cope with that problem (see my portfolio). It is difficult in this genre to get both the figure and the landscape in balance with the same quality. Here the figure is excellent, but if you took her away the landscape would be revealed as being less effective. Nevertheless, a very good effort. Congratulations. john Link to comment
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