davidlong 0 Posted August 12, 2007 I think there's some potential in this scene, but I don't believe this picture quite captures it effectively. The most interesting dynamic is probably between the standing woman, and the person sitting on the right. The framing at the moment truncates this interaction a bit. I would have expected the focus to be on one or the other of these figures, though both appear a bit soft. However, it's hard to tell at such a small size exactly where the focus was, or if perhaps there was some motion blur. That's relatively minor in any case. The biggest problem I think is the competition from the background. There's a "whole lot of nothing" going on there. That is, I don't find any elements in the background to complement or play off the main figures, but in terms of brightness and depth-of-field, it competes heavily, to the detriment of the foreground. Since you probably couldn't do much about the light, a much larger aperture to throw the background way out of focus might have helped. Link to comment
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