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I have only been at this for a couple of years and am looking to

improve your comments will help me greatly.

I like the colors, seems to be fairly sharp. If it were mine I think I would have tried a different composition actually I would have done a whole heap and edited it down to the best at the end. The right hand side I find a wee bit distracting, unless your one who believes in leaveing your image as you shot it, I think I would have a bit of a creative crop. These are just my suggestions what you have here is pretty nice as it is already. Good luck!!

I want to get to the center of this flower but the out of focus petals in the foreground slow me down a bit, but once i get there it's lovely!! Maybe try a different comp. or put more light on the petals in the foreground. Great color! I look forward to seeing more!!!!