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Critiques appreciated.

Very good !

 

Great work, their expression... Have you tried a b/w-version?

Again, nice work. I like the pose. However, I feel the lighting is too harsh, a little burned out. From your other work with Amber, her skin has a beautiful tanned tone, and it's missing in this shot. Just my 2 cents.

I guess you get it a lot but this is just beautiful! There are four shades to the lighting, dark on the right, lightest second, then a little darker and then darkest. Combined with the two tones of the models, one facing and one looking back. 4,2,2 combination. One rule of composition is to always have an odd number of elements. Show you what's possible if you break the rules and do it properly!

 

One of those I wish I had come up with...

Nice expresion , good skin tone and beautiful women..

Love this one, I see fluidity. Kudos.

Wonderful composition and lights .Good atmosphere .