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Focus, DOF, lighting and tones all look good.All the angles in the background and off to the left are very distracting and pull my eye away from the girl. The crooked angle of the upright on the left is also a bit unsettling. That being said; this is, in many regards, a strong image. I hope this was what you meant by " help with any ideas "

Cheers Gord

Only the breaking line of the nose differs in lightness, contrast and nature of the lighting, reflections! Must be easy to fix?!

PDE

I absolutely was drawn to her in B&W ~

SO... here is MY suggestion CROP.

No need to keep her all way far away. SHE would look gorgeous cropped in. Forget that hair that is flying away and the shoulder. The shadow is causing a bit to much right there anyway on her chest anway. Crop her several different ways and see what happens. Put some glow back on her and see if you can move some more light in her. AS Pierre said she has a wonderful softness to her and she just is gorgeous. Maybe some of her other pictures can be moved to B&W. You can keep the DOF to the right as it looks cool.

Somehow I was just drawn to her eyes in this pictures ;)

Hi Tiffany,

love your picture your way but couldnt help to try this hope you don't mind.

hope everything is going fine for you & those you hold dear.

hugh