Yosemite National Park - Half Dome

Taken with a Maxxum 7, 28-85mm lens, exposure: 1/125th @ f/9, fuji

reala rated at 80. No filters or other manipulation. Straight scan

from original print.

I think you probably went a little to wide with the lens, thereby making the close trees look much larger than the mountain itself, thereby taking away from the mountain's grandeur.

Kevin