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I find the composition troublesome. A crop would help this alot. I would remove some of the dead space from above and behind her head.

Also, her shoulders look tense, her neck is bunched up (she should be long and lean) which accentuates her size more than she'd probably like. By moving above her more and shooting down, you'll get a more distinct chinline and disguise a thick neck.

Clever idea with the fern, but it dominates the image. Her expression here doesn't engage me.

Best of luck with future shoots!

:)

Are often found slumbering in the ferns.

Lol it's an OK shot.

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