autumn bride

please critique and comments, thanks

Absolutely wonderful bridal portrait with great technique. However, the composition bothers me a little. It feels like two separate pictures split at the middle. A square crop filled by the bride and her dress or one having a little more at the bottom and less at the top might be stronger. Cheers, J

It is an amazing, beautiful image. Wonderfully conceived and captured. It is possible that the image would be stronger if a bit of the top were cropped off, but I am probably wrong. In any case, it is a wonderful image. Nicely done. Dan

Kenvin, I love the image and the vantage point. I would however go with less space on top I think. Her dress is like a sea which she immersed in, I love the visual.

Yup. Crop in from the top and we have a serious winner. You could maybe even lose a tad of her dress at the bottom as some is already missing. Nothing wrong with interrupting that circle in this case. Excellent concept.

 

EDIT: Upon closer inspection I see why we aren't seeing it any bigger. I think this crop might work better.

WHAT AN ASTONISHING PHOTO IS THAT!!! JUST WONDERFUL , PASSIONATE AND CATCHY. GREAT IDEA!!

Brilliant. 'Wouldn't change a thing.

very nice))

Gorgeous work, Kenvin!

great tones, atmosphere

 

the composition of passion and grace

 

nice feeling.

 

take care

mg

It is perfect. Cropping from the top could ruin the feeling of immersion of the girl into the autumn soul.Congratulations!

good color and composed