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Great composition and lighting

I like the shot. Her eyes are very powerful. I wish you would have been able to get a little more of her chin, but maybe this puts more focus on here eyes.

 

I wish the picture had a little more contrast. Is this little girl blond? I would have like to see the hair a bit lighter, the darks a bit darker...

 

Did you try one of these with fill flash? It can be tough because the N65 doesn't have flash compensation, and it's usually a bit too hot. I'm just curious if you tried any.

I like the drama presented in this photo, her eyes are striking. I like the crop of this photo as well, adds a sense of intimacy and forcefulness...this is the one I enjoy the most of the series. Nice work!

I agree, this is definitely the best of these shots. It has the best focus and expression, and the head looks much more intentionally framed than it does in some of the others. I think the image is compressed a little too much tonally. Don't expand it all the way, but I'd like a little more.

I like this most from all of folder. The contrast much better and eyes are beautifully done. I like how you play up eyes. And no tree. I like this one.

Really nice. Very natural unposed feel and great framing.

Right on target. Good framing, good expression, good separation from the (good, unintrusive but not dull) background, lovely range of tones.

 

This may be a digital artifact, but I'm getting a muddy, splotchy texture in the lower, darker parts of her cheeks.

 

I can't quite make out what is giving the pupils that remarkable shape. Do you know?

This is beautiful Jenny. Beautifully framed, great expression. My screen shows the hair to be very blonde, every screen is calibrated differently, so look at your print and decide. I have plenty of tonal range in what I am seeing. I would like to see just a little catchlight in the eyes though. That is my only minor nit pick. I hope you don't mind.

...nice, it's got a great DOF, good exposure (you can see that she has color in her eyes, and her hair isn't too over, just right)

 

still... there's something missing. I think this would benefit from a little bit more chine, and neck. This makes it look like her chin is resting on the fram... just looks a bit odd. Also, having the ear cropped like that draws way too much attention to the ear. I'd like to see that either completely cropped or with a little breathing room... just my opinions of course. Cheers!

Great shot...for me she has question in her expression. Good light, good sharpness, good

framing (I am a fan of off center posing).

I would only add a little digital light back

to the eye.

I really like the framing in this shot and the expression is priceless well done.

 

Cheers

 

Mark

Its been a while since I have been here so I thought I would start

back with a critique request. Thank you!