Rike

thx for comments !

Nice facial expression and light. My first thought is that you should chop off the blurry bricks on the left and make this a vertical. The left 40 percent of the frame doesn't really contribute much to the overall picture. Otherwise, I like it.

@J Sevigny: thanks for your suggestion for improvement

but I think the wall is a bit intrusive.Thanks for showing.Bye, G.