Intrigued

Shot on the road in India.

Critics and advices welcome !

Beautiful capture of an everyday scene. I love how both parents are turned away, the older child (the girl) is in profile, and the youngest, the boy, is looking right into the lens. There's just enough context (the glimpse of the handlebars, the truck) to know what is going on, but not so much that the faces get lost.

Just a couple of suggestions. I think a square format would work well for this shot: there's some extra space on either side that isn't really adding anything. Also, perhaps burn around the edges a bit to put more of a focus on the kids in the middle.

Excellent work!