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Maybe this works better as a full image. I had posted a crop of this

earlier. Please let me know which works better or if it still doesn't

work. All comments appreciated. Thanks for looking!

Yes, I prefer this one than the crop one. Good job...

Great capture, but I find the legs a little distracting. The earring too. The lighting is soft adn the detail wonderful. Nicely done.

I like this one more than the cropped one. But, once again, too bad for the tan lines. A bit distracting to me

I like the pose, which is different from most. Skin is smooth as is the lighting. If the body was on a diagonal it might add some tension and made it a bit more dynamic. Nice job.

Very tasteful - but I'm not a portrait person so can't say that increasing shutter speed will smooth out the background. But that's the only nitpicky I notice - the background. Everything else is a great job!

I like what you're doing with your glamour shots. This is my favorite so far. I think it would look better if her hair were fanned out down to the bottom of the shot. I Like the catch lights! What did you get? Alien Bees?

Thank you Anthony. Now that you mention it, I do think more of the hair in front would have looked better. :-) Next time!

 

Actually I'm using el cheapo ebay strobes with an umbrella softbox. Couldn't afford real ones, even though I know everybody suggests waiting and not getting the cheap ones. This is just a hobby tho, so I have to compromise... sigh. :-)

 

Thanks for all the comments everybody!

Ha ha ha! I've got a couple of El Cheapo's my self! Better to have, than have not! : )