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Ratings and comments welcome! Thanks in advance - Peter

Nice work. I really like the sensuous mood of the picture, and the composition is well done. The hand feels somewhat disproportionately large, which is an interesting use of perspective. The only thing I find detracting from the quality of this picture is the dark object in the lower left. Perhaps a slight adjustment of cropping to show either more or none of this object would help. I imagine a selenium toned print of this would look fantastic.

I feel it may be too soft even for the mood even for the baby smooth skin tone. The ring detract heavily, the finger nail in the shadows also make a view wonder if the printing was done as well it could have been.

 

Idea behind this seems sound. What does the original unsoften look like ?