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Thank you for your comments.

I really like the lighting, composition and DOF here. He is looking at the camera, so knows there is a photo being taken, which is good (it feels less voyeuristic than sneaking a photo), but he doesn't look as if he really wants the picture taken. I would have preferred to see signs of genuine interaction in his expression - he looks a bit stiff and uncomfortable here. Could you maybe have talked to him a bit before taking the photo to get him more relaxed about it?

I like it. I like the light, the dinity of the man and the square format too.