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Thanks for all suggestions.

wow what a shot your really captued this little girl, great comosition.

Where was this taken?

Very good composition, tones and lighting, but I'm wondering how it might look if you cropped the bottom (which I don't think adds anything) and the left up to the gap in the wall, and just a tinge from up top, leaving the roof of the building in the background. The focus would be tighter on the girl yet still give a feel of her surroundings. Anyway, I experimented a bit, and it seemed to work.

Donna has already said what I was going to say. Such a crop also get the girl off center both vertically and horizonally. Great capture of her expression.

I think this is a very good photo that could be a great photo if you tightened up the composition with a little cropping and burning. I hope you do not take offense by my workng on your photo. I will delete my version if you wish. Its a great photo in any way.

 

 

Thanks for your comments guys, I took this picture in Matucana village, near to Lima, Peru. Cheers!

A great photo. You've inspired others to experiment. In each of the revised versions, Michael and Donna offered a different viewpoint. I like both of them, particularly Donna's simple crop, but the original retains the context to interpret this little girl's life in its totality. Nicely done.