"Ocean Dream"

Any comments or critiques are welcome. I struggled with placing the horizon right at the center, but really wanted the tree branch there and was not able to move to compose differently (on a cliff trail). Does it still work?

 

Thanks,Gary

I think the horizon works very well where it is. The issue I have is the balance of the composition. Having both land and tree at left pull all the weight and attention to that side. Having the light source (sunset) at right helps though. Still, it's a well done capture.

Very beautiful photo! I like the colors and the composition with the tree is very nice. p.s. the horizon is tilting a bit...

This is a very good shot...Don't let this stupid taboo about never to cut a picture in half...always in thirds..stop you from composing the way you seem fit.

Beautiful colors. But I do think it needs some rotation to the left.

It works beautifully. I love the colors and mood. Very nice focus and shutter speed. It could use a lil rotation to the left as mentioned above. A really beautiful piece of work. You should be very pleased with it!

I'm with the crowd, the colours are beautiful, very delicate. A quick correction to the tilt and it's done.

Thank you so much everyone for your suggestions and comments! I rotated it a tad as suggested, hopefully enough?? Thanks again!

 

Regards,

Gary

beatiful compotition and colors

You made some good choices with regards to composition, lighting and shutter speeds to produce a beautiful, well done image Gary. Not sure I would have even noticed the tilting horizon had it not been pointed out by previous posters.

Thank you Eduardo and Jim!

 

Regards,

Gary

Simply love those striking hues and composition, Gary!! Thanks for your kind visit and ratings!

 

Best regards,

 

Rakesh

Thank you also Rakesh! I am so very glad you came by!

 

Regards,

Gary