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how good is this photo?

I think this would be a great addition to a portrait package.

Sorry, but this is basically a pleasing snapshot. There are distracting elements in the background, particularly the basketball hoop. Even a shallower depth of field here would have still left the background distracting. The posing and the expression are good. Look for different locations without the distractions so that the focus is on the subject.

I agree, this falls somewhere between snapshot and PJ-ish style portraiture. It's nice and good, but it's not of any exciting characteristic or any particularly high caliber. However, you're working on something here and I suggest you keep it up.

The models appears holding himself back slightly and not very forth coming perhaps talking to a girl or his senior.

Did you intend the sunlight to fall from the back. I would prefer no sunlight on the face if that was possible in the photo setting.

The white blob in the background just to the right of his face is very distracting.