my mind through my eye 0 Posted May 21, 2007 i like the light and your B&W, but there is a lack of focus on her eyes Link to comment
johnreef 0 Posted May 22, 2007 ann, i think the tilt of her head is doing funny things with her eyes. it might be better with a more direct look at the camera. composition and tonal values are quite nice. Link to comment
crow1 0 Posted May 29, 2007 I think it's a great shot! I like your other work too! Love how the towel carresses her! Link to comment
bodyline 0 Posted May 30, 2007 The tonal range is great providing nice skin tones.The towel provides form to the comp. It is ashame you cropped so tight over her head. Her expression is more inqisitive than provocative. perhaps if she were looking directly at the camera it would make a difference. I do like the shot. Link to comment
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