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Da Barn

Gordon, this one doesn't work for me. I'm short of time and expertise, so you might ask some of the more experienced photogs on the site to critique the technical aspects of the shot...but aesthetically speaking, it simply isn't appealing. it lacks any particular point of interest. from my perspective it seems like one of those shots that when seen first hand is interesting, but the end product, the photograph doesn't capture what you have seen. One technical point: do so work on getting the vertical line of the barn straight. As is, the barn looks as though it leans to the left... which is distracting and takes away from the overall shot. Those who regularly and skillfully shoot architectural photography would find this a glaring problem. Hope you don't seem my comments as negative...intended to be helpful! best regards, John

perhaps you can read past the spelling errors...it's late!

Im not nor ever get mad at the comments on photo .net ,I am here to learn thank you so much . I just like taking shots of old run down things and I was walking My 130 pound German Shepard and he was jerking on the leash , I will definatly keep in mind the points at hand, or I will never lern and my spelling always stinks later Gordon .

Holman, you're truly a better man than me to hold your temper on the kid who keeps asking if you "killed" this person, or a "duck", or whatever... Young "punks" give me real trouble. Keep shooting man...maybe we'll both get there someday!

DON'T SWEAT THE SPELLING...it's not necessary to spell well to become a great photographer!

kick me in the ... you know what if you like! ;)

 

I also straightened it a bit.

 

I used to do these things to print B&W for newsleter publishing stuff.

Hats off to you Miki! good job...

First off, I just recently purchased this barn and I'm converting it to my home.

First thing I had to do was straighten the foundation. As a carpenter, I'm sure you understand looking at the lean.

Upstairs is our bedroom, doing a little reading so ~ see ya!

prity cool dave TY Gordon .