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Improvements pls.

 

Ger..

me encanta felicidades gran toma

Ger super image I really like the composition, its a shame about the shadow around the eyes. Rich.

Thanks for the comments.

Richard, yea that is a pity alright the time of day didn't really suit, I am trying to learn how to use my falsh to counter this.

 

Ger..

In this particular case Ger, even a white card would have bounced the light back up into her face a little... Not so easy while the kids are playing I know, but worth a thought.

Yea I was actually looking at large foam sheets in an art shot the other day...Now if I could find a way to carry it without the wife getting embarassed (not even allowed to bring a brolly with us)

 

Ger..

Ger, aside from the aforementioned eye shadows, she has a very sweet and inquisitive expression. I also like the way her eyes are focused away from the camera. I also think the sweater may be a problem, in that it draws more attention than does her face. It's a bit bright and overwhelming.

Yea Fred,

 

It would be nice if it was a plain white jumper...but hey...I don't make decisions like that!!

Just do what I'm told...

 

Ger..

You move B&W into SEPIA and turn the highlight up a bit and the saturation down and movie it back and forth. My daughter has dark circles and that helps in this case when trying to use pictures in B&W in newsletters and such.

 

This is of course a crude attemps and the white in the background goes a shade draker too. I absolutely LOVE what you did here and give it 6's because I personally LOVE B&W contrast and such.

 

I don't think you really need to go any much lighter on the face because if you printed this out as a real picture it would fix most of the problem. The problem would be if you reproduced this in a newsletter form where the quality would be crappy.

 

I think the was well done and the DOF is really good. I myself can not take photo's like this and always need help from the good old fashion computer.

 

~ micki