valerie_anderson 0 Posted May 13, 2002 please critique as I am starting out in photography an amatear and am very anxious for feedback. Link to comment
nuclearfurnace 0 Posted May 13, 2002 I think you have a good start, there are some distractions above and also to the left of the sign that would be better cropped out or at least out of sight. Maybe a different angle? Maybe standing further away and using a telephoto. You should go back and try different angles, etc. I do like the red glow on the empty table. The only real poor thing is the refelction on the left and visible portion of wall above the sign. Link to comment
reddragonlady 0 Posted May 13, 2002 I feel the same way. Good start. Needs some cropping at the top and maybe some burning of the distracting stuff to the left of the sign. I wouldn't want to crop out the other seat. But I do love the way the sign lights up the empty booth. Link to comment
brian_evans 0 Posted May 13, 2002 The only thing i would change is to crop off the top of the shot. i think i would have the glow of the sign be the upper limit of the photo. but great eye on this scene. Link to comment
st_phanie_medvedieff 0 Posted May 15, 2002 is this a hand in the right of the picture ? I think I would have hidden it. Otherwise, well done ! Link to comment
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