steve_lowther 0 Posted November 20, 2008 This is an excellent story telling image. All I did was detail his face and the sign, and burned in the corners and the thatching overhead. I also emphasized the cigarette smoke. The pot hanging from the wall was also detailed. You will notice I also cropped the door. In addition, I gave it an edge treatment with a little extra width to help offset the narrow aspect ratio of the image. If you don't find my suggestions helpful, please email me and I will delete these comments. Link to comment
jmcconnell2 0 Posted November 20, 2008 This photo has lot of character, and I really like it! Steve`s version is really amateurish. Link to comment
sacbee 0 Posted November 21, 2008 Thanks Kambiz, Jim and Steve. Steve: I like the way smoke is detailed in ur image, but the face looks a bit too distorted. Thanks for your work. Link to comment
steve_lowther 0 Posted November 22, 2008 Yes, I probably overdid the face. Sometimes what I do, is work an area. Then I take the original image as a layer and turn down the opacity to tone down my "enthusiasm". Seriously, just take what I did on his face as potential, and maybe consider it in a toned down version. Link to comment
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