therese 0 Posted March 16, 2007 Good subject expression. The pole on the right is distracting. Think it might be a stronger composition if this were cropped out. Composition is a bit static right now.
malbuquerque 0 Posted March 16, 2007 I also like the subject and the nice exposure, but the composition is not working too well in my opinion. I think the boy had to somehow be moved out of the center. I personally would've liked to see the black pole near the right side of the frame, and more wall to the left of the boy. I don't know if you have that to work with in your original image. Other than the composition, good work.
stephenfarrell 0 Posted March 16, 2007 Thank you for your comments. Yes the composition could be stronger just need to be a little less self conscious when shooting street scenes. Thx again for your remarks.
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