kids Austin

My first attempt at a collage. Please C/C!!!

Austin looks like quite a character, and I think the collage is great. If I had to say anything it would be that the first frame looks a bit familiar to the third frame. Maybe, leave one out and just use three frames, It would still be a great collage. Just my humble amateur opinion.

Mark

 

beauty in simplicity. the model is very expressive. regards!

Very nice, great job!

Extremely expressive... gives a great sense of the kid. I agree with the earlier comment about possibly leaving the first frame out, since the next three are all so different. 2-4 seem to have some sort of progression. Also, the third frame is brighter than the others, which would be nice in the middle. The quote is great too. Made me laugh.

Alex

I agree with all above (Mark included). Maybe a nice, more serious (pensive?) photo to begin the series...? Very nice work.

Beautiful work and darling child. Great job for your first collage.

Beautiful series, each and every shot is great!