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in advance for any commentary.

I like this image, I'm not quite sure why there are so few comments on it. I like the vignetting, and the ?stain? on the floor in front of her, the lines on the back wall, and especially the complete lack of focus... looks like a Holga image. If you get a chance to redo this, I'd consider off-setting the image from the center, since the whole tone compels an idea of "out-of-focus" and the girl being in the middle takes away from that a bit. Though I'm not sure how it would work, I'd also suggest having a smoother transition from the floor to the wall (a sheet maybe?) to further soften the image. Nice job with this. Alex.

like alot this photography,

the gray tone without contrast give a dramatic mood to this image!

 

well done katherine