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after Several exercises , finally i could set shutter and Diafragram

(S 10'', F2.7)

 

for a beginner it is good but waiting for your critiques and

comments to know more . I rely on them

I like where this is going, but I did feel that the image is not quite 'there'. Perhaps the biggest problem I have with this picture is the fact that the upper half of the image is empty and black, and doesn't really add anything to the image. You could say that it conveys a feeling of 'night', but so do the different lights in the picture. So, if I were you, I would crop a big part of the upper half of the image (and give it more of a widescreen feel). Then, I would perhaps be a little more aggressive with levels in Photoshop, and brighten the image up a little (as well as increase contrast). To end, I would saturate. I believe that nightshots like this usually fare well with a bit of saturation.

Dear Zaan

thanks for your comment

it will help me for the future .i dont know whether it is good or not but in this stage of my working i dont believe on editing photos with Photoshop since i beleive i should know the technical items to be a real photographer then edit it . it was the reason to unmanipulate it .and due to this fact you could find my weakness .it is a good sign for me to focus on them and remove them .

 

again thanks and waiting for your valuable feedback

 

POuria

You're welcome!

 

I understand your position on manipulating, but I don't really agree. I've found working in Photoshop to be liberating to the extreme: You add an entire new realm of possibilities to see, explore and improve your photography. It gives you an extra toolset to learn and understand what works for you and what doesn't. As such, I would only recommend it. Moreover, you may rest assured that any serious photographer uses Photoshop (except perhaps the remaining few who've made NOT using Photoshop their trademark). Photoshop is not something that is primarily used to 'fake' images, but rather to aesthetically enhance images so that they shine at their brightest. (It's my opinion that) Using Photoshop is allowed and good!

thanks

i got it now .i will work more with Photo shop from now on.on the sdie line i try to learn more about technical items .

again thanks