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Hey, Bryon. I think it's a great shot and fits in nicely with your portfolio and your overall vision. The colors, shapes, and perspective work well together and you've composed it artistically. Ok, so now . . . I find a little too much noise especially in the yellow wall the bottom half. It feels like this photo in particular (and I don't say this about all photos by any means) needs to be clean, crisp, and sharp to be most effective. I also think some of your other stuff has more depth to it contentwise. Your broken-down trolleys, for instance. They are a study in color and form, but they also tell a story and are multi-layered (seeing through the trolley windows to the outside world, for instance). Overall, though, I am moved by your work and this photo was eye-catching enough for me to open it and want to see more of your photos, so that in itself says a lot. --Fred