gerfoy3 0 Posted March 8, 2007 Wanted to try something a bit different. Is it too dark on the far side? Ger.. Link to comment
fotofrog 0 Posted March 8, 2007 Yes, I agree with the last comment. I really do like it, but the white stripe is the first thing that you see, and I spent ages trying to work out what it was? I love how you have lighted the subject though and the red coat is a great contrast against the 'dark'. Link to comment
gerfoy3 0 Posted March 8, 2007 Yea, amazing how you don't see your errors until pointed out to you and then THAT IS ALL YOU CAN SEE!! Ger.. Link to comment
dee 14 0 Posted March 8, 2007 I don't have a problem with the red coat... Just the white line on her hood... It seems painted in. I love the expression, and of coarse the contrast. Very great use of DOF. So... When's dinner? LOL! Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted March 9, 2007 Hey, Ger, this is wonderful. It's a kid's portrait that's not all cute and typical. It's a very creative and artistic approach. I think your perspective is good, the cropping is intimately close, and she's caught right in the middle of something. Red jacket, great. White line, problem. Dark far side could have a bit more detail. Those last three technical points much less important than what you have so well accomplished here. Link to comment
gerfoy3 0 Posted March 9, 2007 Hi Darren, How is Sunday For You!!! Maybe some day, you never know Thanks for the comments Ger.. Link to comment
dee 14 0 Posted March 10, 2007 Sunday... Hmmmmm... Ya, sounds good! Whatcha' drinking?!? LOL! Hey, I'd love to visit Ireland someday. Keep the photo's coming. Link to comment
gerfoy3 0 Posted March 10, 2007 Well, if I'm still here your more than welcome to check me out! Ger.. Link to comment
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