A Sweet Day

I think maybe the white on her face is a bit harsh

On my monitor the flesh tones in the sunlight look ok but that's pretty subjective. Nothing blown that I see. The shadow side could be brought up some to decrease the local contrast in her face. The outfit might need some work with the highlights.

Thanks, my regular computer crashed and I am working on a laptop LCD so I have a hard time judging. I was also thinking that the outfit needed a bit of work. Thank you again!