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This is the first picture I upload for critique. Thanks! Hope to learn

a lot from your opinions!

It is very interesting that you posted this when you did, I just posted a couple of mine relating to the same type of subject.... Good Job and keep shooting.

I like the message this sends, and I like the angle you chose - it gives a more dynamic feel than you would have gotten if you shot this straight on. Also, this is a good choice for the square format - it adds to the impact of the photograph. I'd like to see the high tonal values be higher though, they appear a bit muddy as they are here, but don't change the lower values. There is a nice amount of detail inside the hole, and it is very important to keep that if you want to preserve the impact. If you were printing this I would suggest cutting the print time by %10-20, and then look at the lower values in the dry print to make sure they still have nice depth. Very nice work.

 

- Randy

impressive...