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THANX!

I dunno, I think the composition works as is. I like the placement of the flower.

 

My bones to pick with this image are as follows...

 

1. Everything it slightly tilted to the right. That can be fixed easily enough in photoshop.

 

2. The lighting is slightly in oppertune. The light seems to be coming nearly from the front of your image. If you were to catch this location at a time of the day where the light was coming from the right hand side, thus nicely lighting up the flower and the headstones I think it would give the image alot of pop. Right now the flower is the anchor of the composition, but it's in the shadow of the headstone which imho doesn't work.

 

This is an outstanding idea, and I love the relections on the tombstone.

Thanx guys for all ur commentz ! I'll try to go back in this cimetery to apply all the good advices u gave me ! I'll give it a shot too in PS ! More to come... Thanx again for taking the time to give commentz !!!