Portrait of K

Any constructive criticism or comments welcome.

 

Thanks,

 

Charles.

i think the hand is little bit OE,and the head was UE,but is all about the taste,hehe :D

Losing the hat to background. Would like to see more of the hat! I think the fingers would be better curled. Position of model and pose are good.

I like this one better than the Spring portrait. Hat is a little to dark in relation to the background and I'd prefer to zoom out a little more. The pose is very strong and the expression well captured. Good tones, detail and the b/w does the job (well, at least for me!) Very well done!