looking over my shoulder

I like!

I think I like the second exposure to the left better than the third in the bottom right.

 

I think it has a much more interesting, ghostly effect. The one on the bottom right seems to have been overexposued (I don't just mean the blow out on his chest) for the effect that you are creating.

Daniel, it looks truly original to me. Is it a self-portrait? One thing I would experiment with: I'd either make the lines vertical, or rotate them further to make them diagonal. Happy shooting --Sergei

Thanks for the comments. Yes, it is a self-portrait. I am the person in the front, looking over my shoulder in the background, and somewhat of an apparition in the middleground. This was done with my camera on "bulb," a dark hall, and a handheld flash.

This is my favorite idea on this folder. Maybe the closest image could be darker and the phot less tilted. But this is very original and it transmits a lot of feelings.