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© Lavern Burk 2006

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© Lavern Burk 2006

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As suggested here is a copy of the Imperial Dunes photo without the

tree showing. Let me know which is better. The one thing about the

tree is the depth it provides. Maybe it would be better though with

it moved to one side. Let me know what you think please.

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I have not seen the other version with the tree, but the shapes of the dunes and the way the curves go from front left to upper right center work well.

 

In the large view the boundary between dunes and sky is odd - I assume because you inserted this sky from another photograph, right? If you are going to go down that path, it might look a bit more realistic to a picky viewer if you feathered the border between sand and sky so that it had about the same sharpness as other elements of the photo.

 

(If you did not add the sky after the fact, I'm even more curious about the "jaggy" border...)

 

Take care,

 

Dan

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Lavern, I do prefer this version. This is more elemental, and the addition of a piece of vegetation just seemed out of place -- it did not match. However, I had not noticed the sky previously, and the presence of stars really enhances this image for me. Nicely done.
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Thank you all for the comments. I did add the night sky (I stated that in the first version I should have done so here) Thanks for the feathering tip Dan. I am a Photoshop CS2 neophyte so all tips are teaching aids. But both photos were taken from same general area of the desert but at different times.
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