Liz

Thanks everyone!

Hi Clara, I like the lighting and her expression, but I wouldn't crop so close to the face, so as to give some space for her to look to? Just my opinion, thanks.

a agree that you should have cropped less, but even this way it's not so bad. The lighting could have been softer and the triangle you have under the left eye should have been closer to the nose. Also there is too much shadow on the left cheek. If she would move a bit to the right, the triangle and the cheek shadow would both get fixed :))

The shadow is there on purpose, not as a result of technical error. If it accomplishes nothing for you, of course I would like to know, but I'd also like you to look at it again with that in mind. Thanks for your comments.