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Please Critique

Just busy and feels a little sloppy due to distractions, i.e. Hand outstretched by the man on the far left comes out of the chest of the other. Man in far background. If there was a strong subject matter here these things might not matter.

So many questions ... who, when & why - Reservoir Dogs or Sergent Bilko? 1960's or present day? Alumni or gangsters? What's in the book?

I quite like this. It has the feeling that something historical is in the making as if a candid shot of a group of politicians preparing a manifesto. Sure it's busy but it's not posed, it was taken as it happened, as in a good street photograph. Nice exposure too with inky blacks and well controlled highlights.

i think the guy on the left is beautifullest. but then, he on the right is most "classy". the one in the middle isn't all that patient,... hell, tens of stories are unfolding.. ,-)