Bridesmaids & Brides

The composition of this shot is absolutely spectacular, but the focus on the primary subject seems to be a bit off. You might consider using the subjects' eyes as the are on which the camera should be focused. Great work!

Brilliant idea, and excellent composition. A couple of nits to pick - The lighting on the bridesmaid is a bit too contrasty, with the highlights burning out. (This may possibly be due to the small file size on the net). Second, the bride's head is too close to the dark archway in the background, and has become a bit "lost". If she was half a metre to the left, this would be fixed.

Nice composition. Not sure about the pose of the girl in the foregroung, would have prefered something more natural, also the focus is out. If the D30 is anything like my EOS30, then there is a fool proof depth of field function. I'm afraid even with a top notch body like the D30 and the superb f2.8 canon you still have to tell it where you want it to focus.

Verna - I love this picture! The exposure and composition is a bit off - but "story" within this shot is so well captured! Wonderfully creative...

 

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I like the originality and perspective. I wish the woman in the foreground were sharper though.

Hi Verna, This photo is lovely :) The "story is interesting" and also the way how you picture it

 

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My favorite of your photos. Toning down the exposure on the left would make this even better.

Great idea for a photo.

What a fun & whimsical folder...you see the world through a clean lens! Kudos

what a great shot. I'd only add one thing: maybe burn in the skirt of the girl in the foreground a bit to get a little separation from column.

I was just asked to do a wedding in 2003, you have given me some very insipiring ideas. This is beautiful. Keep up the good work.

Great composition and capturing of the moment. I do wish the maid's skirt wasn't so washed out though. Nice work!

I wonder What shes thinking about.