billkantor 0 Posted December 10, 2006 Jeffrey, Another very nice image. Like the other one this works quite well but the sky seems a bit unnaturally dark. I'd back off just a tad. So how'd you do this? GND, sky curv with PS mask, two exposures merged? Do tell. Bill Link to comment
jeffreylee 0 Posted December 11, 2006 Bill, thanks your lovely comment. I agree the sky was a bit dark so I slightly adjusted and upload it again. What I did on this photo is using "Black Card" which I have explained in http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=5023179 please check it out from the link. For post PS work, I used Curve to adjust the color and contrast. I also used Dodge to bring up more detail on the rocks. Last I sharpen Tools to sharp up the detail. I also very admire your talent on your portfolio and your constructive comment opposite to any 3/3 anonymous photo masters. Link to comment
billkantor 0 Posted December 11, 2006 This is great. I see you are very imaginative and resourcesful in your use of simple tools to produce extraordinary results. This is like in-camera dodging and burning. I love it! Thanks for the tip. I'll be trying this myself. I note that I haveused a GND filter successfully but there are situations in which the GND does not fit. E.g., looking directly into a sunrise--the GND makes the sky above too dark. See here for such an example. The results are not so bad but different from what I had intended. Link to comment
jeffreylee 0 Posted December 11, 2006 Thanks for coming and also please visit jeffreylee.siteburg.com/bilgola.php Link to comment
jminer 0 Posted December 11, 2006 Very pretty shot. I like the choice of portrait orientation to really stretch the distance to the horizon. Also, the channel forms an excellent line to the sun. Cheers! Link to comment
jeffreylee 0 Posted December 11, 2006 Thanks Sarah, Jason and Brett. Jason, very please you like the way of my composition on this photo. I idea was to use the channel leading our eyes to the sun. Link to comment
jeffreylee 0 Posted December 11, 2006 Bill, thanks your sharing. I see your problem on your photo but I never use Grad filer so nothing I can comment on your work. I heard about something call "reverse grad filter" could solve the problem. Please check http://www.betterphoto.com/blogs/insights/archives/2005/08/a_very_cool_fil.htmlAlso probably your can try "Black card" as well. My friend he is using both Black card and filter. His comment is the black card is a better tools for digital camera on the high contrast situation like sunrise than filter but not for film camera because probably you can only hit one right photo from a few failed photos. My thought only can improve your photo is to bright up slightly a bit of the foreground. Of course it is only my opinion. Link to comment
marc_krutiak 0 Posted December 11, 2006 Jeffrey, Nothing more needed. Beautiful image! Link to comment
kahkityoong 0 Posted December 11, 2006 Exposure is spot on. The composition is very effective, the line of water leading to the sun. Link to comment
tabitha_varnu 0 Posted December 12, 2006 I actually like this exposure. Great detail in your foreground and I like the placement of the sun resting on the horizon which is straight as an arrow. The only critism I would make is that it looks like you over dodged on the left side right around the horizon line. Other than that a great shot. Link to comment
crabseye 0 Posted December 12, 2006 I think this is one of the loveliest photos I have ever seen. Subtle colors, amazing depth of field, and intelligent composition. Really a fine piece. Link to comment
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