In the wine cellar

Hello Toshio. I like the framing and the shape of the bars. The background, however, has nothing of interest. What is your intent here? Is it to have this interesting framing showing the bars and what is outside doesn't count - is not important? Or is it to show the outside through the interesting window?

If it's the first one, then I find the outside, the background, distracting, as it is too much in focus. It should be blurry so it would allow the bars to stand out. If it's the second one, then the outside has nothing of interest. There are some partially blurry branches and a little piece of a building (or whatever it is). Something needs to be done with the background. What it is depends on your intent. Cheers, Micheal