mgbeach 0 Posted December 7, 2006 at Sullivan's Island, SC. Digital Rebel, ef24-85, Alien Bees B800 Link to comment
zastrozzi 0 Posted December 7, 2006 Really, besides the pretty serious burnout in the left corner (too hot for me in any event) - there's only one thing that stuck out to me. You mention the alien bees, but there still appears to be a faint halo around your model that's noticeable between the bg and her contour, like you've blended exposure or burned and dodged. That said, I really like this image. The highlights on her skin from the sun are great. Your attractive model's pose is interesting. (though there is a harsh shadow under her hand...eliminate with softbox maybe?). You've caught a nice experession. Many things working here. Take care, James Added: a crop would get rid of much of that burnout and get your viewer's eye more up close and personal with your lovely model. Link to comment
mgbeach 0 Posted December 7, 2006 Thanks for the heads up on the halo. I meant to go back and clean that up and forgot. Here's the corrected version. The upper left comes down to personal preference, so flip a coin there :) Link to comment
raddatzphoto 0 Posted December 7, 2006 I think you caught too much of her back and the rock w one of those bee's, and a square crop (although all the the sky works well) might look better on this. Beautiful capture, Mike! Link to comment
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