Alex

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I think the image suffers from too much dynamic range, beyond the capability of the film or sensor. The background is too bright and a loss of detail in the hair. I understand this may be the intended style, but my eye is drawn to the bright areas. I think the head is positioned too close to the edge of the picture space and it bothers me how it�s just a sliver cropped, however the angle of the persons look is very good. The image is very compelling in its story telling, it�s easy to play instant history with this imagine what�s going on. Good originality, but IMHO needs technical improvements.