Marriage: the Union of Contrasts

This is a traditional analog BW photo (+ toning) on a FB paper. It

presents my idea of wedding photography: to capture the inner layers

hidden behind the veneer of the usual and to enhance the drama and

the beauty of the moment by classical monochrome aesthetic. Thanks.

OK, on my monitor the bride's head-piece and dress are totally burned out and devoid of detail, same with the groom's forehead and collar. Is this an accurate representation of the print? If it is,then you really have to back and work on these highlights to rescue them. Also I don't think the toning works, it brings a dullness especially to the bride's skin which should be light and radiant with the joy of the moment.