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All your comments are welcome. Thanks for looking, Dave

There is too much out of focus and in the shade for my liking. If it wasn't for the title I wouldn't have a clue what was going on.

Bravo Dave!

I really like the picture, it has a good feel and an atmosphere of sincerity

Very good work Dave Regards, Catalin

Thanks Dale, Chris, Jan, and Catalin. Dale, the only part of the picture that is in focus is the back of the shirt of the guy on the right, too far back really. Indoor shot, had to shoot quick, wide open, non-auto-focus. All I can say in my defense about the darkness is this: when I lightened it up, I didn't like it as much! Thanks for the critique and for not smacking me with a 3/3 (or worse.)

 

Dave

Clean?

'Impeccable!' Check original comment for edit!

 

Dave

"Way out of focus, way too black" - this is exactly what makes this photo so great. Good composition Dave. Cheers, Cris.

Thanks, Cris, I appreciate that very much my friend. Regards, Dave

I don't think it needs to be in focus to get the point across. Because it's so dark, you've already stated that the details are not the purpose of this image.

I like your shadows.I want to make photos like this. Babis

I am certain from looking at your portfolio that you are quite capable of making photos like this, just don't trust the light meter! Good luck!

 

Dave