Sunset Already?

I like this picture but I don't think it works as

well as it could. The dark spot is an obvious

problem, I'd like to hear critique on composition,

DOF, and overall idea.

 

Thanks!

your model seems very relaxed. You've done a great job of working with the talent to make them feel at home.

 

I would love to see more of the right eye.

 

Great job!!

i'm surprised to see someone else using a barbie..look at mine! i like whatu did..very similar i think to what i was trying to do.

 

Matt: Thank you! This was a quick idea with no decent camera on hand. I'm hoping to get back to thearea this spring to shoot it again, with morecontrol (and fill). Thanks for your insight.

Melissa: Love your doll photos! See my commentsthere. You might enjoy my fiancee's doll "photo-comic" at www.jendini.com. This image was taken when I was out assisting with her project.

This is interesting. How about a series using Barbie. Were you commenting on anything when you took this? You've got two pretty powerful symbols here.

I had to laugh outloud at this.