Outside the Excalibur

A nice overall picture, but there is always a way to improve a picture.

For one thing, you mention the Excalibur but it's barely noticable. If you wanted to associate your picture or your subject with the setting your should have found a way of including the background a bit more. Let's say you applied the rule of thirds by placing your subject on the left or right side of your picture and included some of the background that way... Or you could have found a way to frame your subject with certain parts of the Excalibur.

Lighting always helps too. There was a correcte dose of flash but since it was used straight in her face you get some uninteresting shadows. Maybe finding another sorce of light would be better.

All in all this is a good picture - you just asked how one could improve on it.