Studio #1

Waiting for giving a critical to be better photographer:]

Hot-as-hell model. Good pose and light for the most part. Extra strap on left shoulder, hand position is very awkward. Keep shooting, she's gorgeous! Got a phone number?

Nice shot. But yes, the left hand position is a bit awkward.

Right, left hand hurts me too-pitty.

Got number.. model is from Poland;)

best regards

Got number.. model is from Poland;)

Damn Slavic women get me every time... (I'm of Russian descent.) She's lovely in any case.

piotr...i will join the rest in praising the lovely lass...

ok getting back to the pic....I like the exposure and the colour rendition. but i think this picture has three other elements which fight for the second place for attention from the viewer. i.e the wall, blue wooden table and red handle bar (i guess). Use fewer elements, especially when cropping in a little. Her pose makes her look slightly uncomfortable. I have just one advice...re-shoot. If you need more help..i will be happy to assist. :).