Sound of Music

War Memorial San Francisco

50th Anniversary of Hungarian Revolutin.

the photo looks good, just a few things: slightly tilted to the left (about 1 degree), the green light on the upper right corner of the door does not fit too well IMHO. Also I would like it better, if the human figure was slightly larger (i.e. closer). On the other hand - the photo has the atmosphere. Maybe portrait instead of landscape formatting would like better (especially for corridors - it often looks better). Regards!

Right on the tilt, I saw it and framed it and wondered.. i guess you are right.

The Green light (Exit) had to be there.

 

Portrait... Yes often they look better.. I was going for the wide forground and long depth...

 

Low perspective liquid floor.

 

 

Next time wil try Portrait.

Perhaps a tilt shift too.