at the train station

My first photo of Karoline. Thanks for any comments and critique.

I like the story telling sence , well done.

You beat me to it, would say the same thing: a story in this pose. The angle of the awning reinforces it. Very memorable.

Great tones and feeling to the photo,thanks for sharing it. I am sure it will not be your last photo of Karoline............

You definately nailed this one. I don't think it could be improved on!

Norway.. that's what it was.. i was keep looking at it and it just didn't feel right from the image engraved in my mind. she seem to be enveloped in her cloth and her cloth isn't showing any movement. she seem to be leaning but her hair is in perfect still. it's kinda embarassing and self-deprecating to be critical on a nice photo like this. i won't comment on a bad photo.

magnificent!!! the anxious manner she's looking 4 someone 2 arrive. one hand trying 2 pull the glove from the other hand shows her longing & anxiety. wonderful light & tones. but, its the marvellous DOF control that adds drama. regards!

THIS IS A WORK OF ART!!!

very slick..............

Beautiful portrait and an amazing shot!!! 7/7

Beautiful work. Amazing beautiful model, and wonderful moment of awaiting. The look, her pose, great quality, clock in the background, rails closing the composition. Thank you for sharing.

Beautiful model and very expert work on the composition and lighting.

Beautiful finishing and an enchanting model.

Excellent work!

Great lighting, toning and compo. Gr. Eduard

WELL THIS IS GREAT

A RARE CASE OF A PHOTO MORE BEAUTIFUL THAN THE MODEL

good photo!

A lovely composition.

I like this, this is a very good photo. 7/7

WOW! Thanks for all the positive critique. Thanks everybody :)

This is a GREAT picture. Besides what's been already told, I like the fact that she leans right and seems to be supporting herself in the railway. This wouldn't have worked had she used a light-colored jacket.

 

I WISH I could do staged portraits like this.

This is an awesome capture dude..! everything works well...

the slanted lines of the train the canopy and her tilt..all add to the drama of the picture. the tones are beautiful too. I thinkg even the sepia works well here. the only thing that takes me out of the picture is the mountain skyline. but thats absolutely a very minor detail..! Nice shot.

 

...I love her...it, sorry!

Nicely done!

Great work

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Lovely.

The second is great too ... with her head in the bg clock place :)

Your model is very precios, believe me.

 

More comps?? :D

I love this shot, the sepia color gives a nice hue to the mood of the photograph. the blurred DOF blends so beautifully with the scene, you are going to make it BIG dude, trust me, All the very best.