Backlit

How's this?

I think the lighting is very off. The harsh shadow & light on her feet along with the very bright background. It doesn't seem to work

Unfortunately, everything is in between, the model is underexposed and the background overexposed. Try again with a neutral background and strive to capture the skin tones and reubenesque quality of the woman. Also perhaps if she were looking up, it would add more of an elegance to the pose.

There are so many different things you could do here to show off her curves and lines. Excelent try but to be very honest I think this is one situation where your camera will limit you in a big way. Some point and shoots are very capable of capturing photos but the HP you are using will strugle to get a photo like this and maintain results that you will be happy with.

 

Keep practicing try different poses to show her lines and when you feel youve maxed your camera for the results shop for a new one.

 

Id say hands together when she streches, look up keep lines long and maybe give her a colorfull wrap to accent her mid section while keeping the alure.

 

Love seing them and keep them coming.