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Gracias

I think a touch more light would be good here. The image is fun and I like it but possibly not the most original!

I nevertheless enjoyed this one. I would like to have seen the model a bit to the left and the panel on the left taking up less horizontal space. Perhaps that wouldn't be an issue if the wood weren't so bright. Anyway, her gesture is every man's dream and her body every man's desire.

please take some lessons (nudes photos)

I like the concept, and the pose works well. I think perhaps a less-cluttered background would help- perhaps a hallway rather than a room.